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Through these plastic veins
with drew comes blood and pain

A broken heart
a soulless shadow

And your ghost still creeps the night

A haunted a dream
a fake taunted scheme

Words meaningless
love seemingless

Since when did love become just another noun?
a phrase forgotten?

A word in the dictionary
it seems so big
yet sensations are small
compared to the others who stand so tall
it's just another word
no special meaning behind
just another thing tossed around in a conversation from time to time

No meaning at all
just a cover-up with an empty shell

No, this word...
LOVE
has no meaning at all
©2008-2009 ~princesslisaloo
:iconprincesslisaloo:

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not much to say,just a random idea i got while having a sleep over...*sigh* i sorta like the concept of it but...it's not that amazing...well,please give advice, fav, comment, watch <33 dunka.

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:iconcowgirl4:
There we go. You're getting the hang of it, just keep remembering smoothness. SMOOOTH! :D

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"Sie will es und so ist est fien
So war es und so wird es immer sein
Sie will es und so ist est Brauch
Was sie will bekommt sie auch"
- "Rosenrot" by Rammstein

If you want a translation, look it up.
:iconprincesslisaloo:
thank you for the advice, again!! i have some lines that dun fit in the best but i just can't help but put in...

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hey, srry to everyone for my late replies, i quit DA for a long time and i'm getting back into the hang of it now.
:iconcowgirl4:
I know what you mean. I've got soooo many of those...

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"Sie will es und so ist est fien
So war es und so wird es immer sein
Sie will es und so ist est Brauch
Was sie will bekommt sie auch"
- "Rosenrot" by Rammstein

If you want a translation, look it up.
:iconprincesslisaloo:
i just think of lines i find so clever and just can't help but put it..

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hey, srry to everyone for my late replies, i quit DA for a long time and i'm getting back into the hang of it now.
:iconcowgirl4:
I know, it can be frusturating...especially when they're so good you just have to add them. XD I know exactly how you feel.

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"Sie will es und so ist est fien
So war es und so wird es immer sein
Sie will es und so ist est Brauch
Was sie will bekommt sie auch"
- "Rosenrot" by Rammstein

If you want a translation, look it up.
:iconprincesslisaloo:
haha, and sometimes i feel it'd be rude to the line to not add it if it's what brought on the poem itself...yes, thank you.

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hey, srry to everyone for my late replies, i quit DA for a long time and i'm getting back into the hang of it now.
:iconcowgirl4:
Hehe, not a problem!

--
"Sie will es und so ist est fien
So war es und so wird es immer sein
Sie will es und so ist est Brauch
Was sie will bekommt sie auch"
- "Rosenrot" by Rammstein

If you want a translation, look it up.
:iconprincesslisaloo:
so what is up?

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hey, srry to everyone for my late replies, i quit DA for a long time and i'm getting back into the hang of it now.
:iconcowgirl4:
Hunting season's coming, that's what's up!! Two weeks baby...and I'm gonna get my deer this year! :w00t: Moose seasons over, and bear is finishing up, so onto deer season. I can't wait!
How 'bout you?

--
"Sie will es und so ist est fien
So war es und so wird es immer sein
Sie will es und so ist est Brauch
Was sie will bekommt sie auch"
- "Rosenrot" by Rammstein

If you want a translation, look it up.

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